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Date: 2009-01-10 10:49 pm (UTC)
THIS. Oh my gosh, this was perfect and amazing!

Of course Feliciano would be in and out to visit the most powerful spell houses of Caprona.

The writing style is DWJ to a tee--and yet somehow manages to work in Hetalia's characters in such a wonderfully natural way. I adore the way you've shown Feliciano's relationship to his city-states and citizens, and in Chrestomanci-verse too, and the little nods to Ludwig and S. Italy and UK...and I really liked the way you described Feliciano's hair. :3 Which might sound like an odd comment, but I've never seen anyone describe his hair in the way you've done it, and I love those naturalistic details. It really gives Feliciano a sense of a being a real, tangible person.
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