Nice. Very, very nice. I really like your writing style, and the dialogue you created. I added this fic to my list of Luck/Eve fanfic recs at my journal, hope that it's okay.
And wow, I totally LOL'd at your comments about Delita and Ovelia, especially "less likely to shoot each other in the face" =D
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And wow, I totally LOL'd at your comments about Delita and Ovelia, especially "less likely to shoot each other in the face" =D