I don't comment nearly enough on your fic but I really do love to read it. This piece especially, man. I like the tone, sort of middle ground between emotional and removed in describing what is the everyday combat and death around them. It's short but very nicely done, doesn't need anymore.
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Date: 2003-11-25 08:06 am (UTC)