Beautiful piece -- I love the character you put into Hiashi, so much more complete than we see in Naruto itself, though it follows what we're given /of/ him. I like that a lot. And Hinata, poor sweet thing -- not many people can write her as she is without turning her into this wretched ball of gigglesighhide that seems so often to be the norm. Wonderful work, and a very nice ending. ^_^
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Date: 2003-12-28 08:39 am (UTC)Beautiful piece -- I love the character you put into Hiashi, so much more complete than we see in Naruto itself, though it follows what we're given /of/ him. I like that a lot. And Hinata, poor sweet thing -- not many people can write her as she is without turning her into this wretched ball of gigglesighhide that seems so often to be the norm. Wonderful work, and a very nice ending. ^_^