Ah, I love Hinata when she's being the lovely mix of timid weakness and cunning strength that only she manages ^_^. Beautiful story, as always. I like the way in which you only write what's necessary (ie. leaving out Neji's name, not elaborating on what the 'notice' was) yet still have everything so understandable.
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Date: 2004-01-15 02:50 am (UTC)~Rel