My, this is very late, but I had to comment. *Beautiful.* I loved it. Al is perfect; I love the way you portrayed him, so happy to be in his own skin again, so innocent and sweet even through all his experiences. And I like how you wove the normal home life into the fic, with the bits about Winry's clients, how they fitted in and just gave this story a sense of homeliness and normality. Gorgeous, hope you write more!

KH: Hm, I never really felt any sympathy for Riku. He made bad choices and, in the end, I always felt it was really his own fault, while Sora and Kairi were just kind of caught up in it. But I am a cold-hearted bitch, so. XD Great game.