ext_9938 ([identity profile] rondaview.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] moonsheen 2004-06-25 12:52 pm (UTC)

Everytime I read a fic of yours it just completely breaks my brain and leaves me utterly incapable of saying anything constructive because oh em gee everything! the characterization! the dialogue! I've always loved how you always seem to have everything in the palm of your hand, the tone & the pacing, very loose and very natural, and the bunny clips of DOOM = MASSIVE SPARKLING LOVE and this line: "He thinks she looks good in uniform again. He also thinks she is raging bitch" was such a great hook and had me going Heeeeeeeeeee. I know we've never really talked too much but it's things like this that makes me wish we do. ^^ Thank you for posting.

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