Here via incoming, and I don't even know what I can SAY to express how much I liked this. I love the way you've protrayed Sora, his leaping and his excitement and the way Kairi and Riku are just following in his grand wake, hahahaa. Man. This was so funny and poignant and it made me feel a lot like the game did, actually, like a fun rollicking adventure that pauses every so often to knife you in the guts.
Seriously, though, your writing style is so beautiful, and I love the scene cuts. I think especially I love how there are so many things hidden, like shells in the sand that you maybe notice (twirling his sword like a mercenary!) but even if you didn't it doesn't take away from the story at all. Axel is such a presence it's almost palpable in the end of Act III, Scene 5 and in Act IV Scene 1, but you never even mention him outright.
I don't know, maybe it's just me and I have gone totally looney toons with Kingdom Hearts love, but this is like. Honestly, one of the most wonderful stories I have ever had the privilege to read. Thank you! ♥
(And uhm, apologies for the long-ass scary comment when you have no idea who I am, haha. >.>)
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Date: 2006-06-19 03:49 am (UTC)Seriously, though, your writing style is so beautiful, and I love the scene cuts. I think especially I love how there are so many things hidden, like shells in the sand that you maybe notice (twirling his sword like a mercenary!) but even if you didn't it doesn't take away from the story at all. Axel is such a presence it's almost palpable in the end of Act III, Scene 5 and in Act IV Scene 1, but you never even mention him outright.
I don't know, maybe it's just me and I have gone totally looney toons with Kingdom Hearts love, but this is like. Honestly, one of the most wonderful stories I have ever had the privilege to read. Thank you! ♥
(And uhm, apologies for the long-ass scary comment when you have no idea who I am, haha. >.>)