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Giselle stared. “But… but…. how does she know?”

“Oh no,” said Robert.

She advanced with wide-eyed purpose. There was a distinct hint of a melody in it.

“You’ve got to show her you love her,” said the messy-haired kid, reasonably. Giselle’s face lit up. She whirled and took his hands. The kid stared back with the exact. same. face.

“Shit,” said Riku, because he could swear in this world, and because Donald and Goofy weren’t around to look disappointed at him for it. He kind of liked that.

Giselle continued: “How does she know that you really--”

“--truly?” supplied Sora, the grin was beginning to grow.

“Love her!” finished Giselle, matter-of-factly.

That was around the time the accompaniment burst into full orchestra. Or marching mand. Or whatever it was.

Riku didn’t consider himself an expert on weird cases of dissociative disorder, but he was pretty sure this should’ve been the point when Roxas threw their collective self into the lake. Something seemed to be keeping him. It might’ve been the choreography, as both pretty princesses began spinning their way off along the path.

“...a thousand worlds,” grumbled Riku, “And we had to find the one with the go find your dream number.”

“Don’t look at me,” said Robert. “It’s all her. … and that kid.”

“Sora,” said Riku, with enough attitudes to put the lawyer off him for life if they weren’t currently sympathizing with each other’s plight. He looked like the kind of guy Morgan would find dreamy in a few years, and Robert wasn’t having fun with the thought.

So he just said, “So does he do this wherever he goes?”

“Only when you encourage him,” said Riku, pointedly.

‘Encouragement’ was happening full swing, seeing as a group of joggers had been roped into a very elaborate line dance. They were also all suddenly in a different part of the park. Both parties just thoroughly ignored this. Sora and Giselle were basking in it.

“I didn’t know he knew the words,” said Robert.

“And I wanted to catch a cab,” Riku shot back. “Your world’s is psychotic. You’ve got a ton of heartless in your train system, by the way. Also, you guys charge way too much for things like, ice cream.”

Robert, who only understood part of that, just frowned and said, “Yeah, well, that’s Manhattan for you.”

The teenager, who didn’t understand any of that, just looked blank. “I thought this place was called New York.” That was when they both noticed they’d unwittingly begun wiggling vaguely to the beat. They stopped at once.

Riku coughed, “Think we can catch them at the chorus.”

“Why not. And put that back, you didn’t pay for it.”

Sourly, Riku stuck the candied apple back in its place. The vendor looked strangely disappointed, but it was a hard thing to notice, when the whole world was apparently now song.

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Date: 2007-12-31 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] memlu.livejournal.com
SCREAM. Oh my gosh, I don't have an OVERWHELMING JOY icon anymore. omg.

*HEARTS DESPERATELY IN APOLOGY*

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Date: 2007-12-31 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] colortheory.livejournal.com
That was HILARIOUS. And awesome. I love it.

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Date: 2007-12-31 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rukia.livejournal.com
I laughed so hard I got tears in my eyes. That is AWESOME and so perfect.

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Date: 2007-12-31 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wakuchan.livejournal.com
asdfl; ♥!! I just. Brilliant.

IT'S PERFECT. PERFECT

Date: 2007-12-31 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raineyz.livejournal.com
HAVE MY EVERLASTING LOVE ♥♥♥

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Date: 2007-12-31 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halcyonjazz.livejournal.com
YOU WROTE IT

AND IT'S WONDERFUL

<3333333333333

(why don't I have Enchanted icons)

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Date: 2007-12-31 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tatooine.livejournal.com
This is the best link I ever clicked.

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Date: 2007-12-31 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ningen-demonai.livejournal.com
Oh man. That's perfect and I can imagine that SO WELL pfftahahahahah. XD Oh Sora, you and your singing. ♥

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Date: 2008-02-13 08:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] crescent-grin.livejournal.com
That was quite possibly the best thing I've ever read. EVAR.

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Date: 2008-04-10 09:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caliborn.livejournal.com
Totally late to the commenting party here, but... WIN. Just win. <3

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Date: 2008-05-02 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mousezilla.livejournal.com
Here from chira-chira's devart peice. (http://chira-chira.deviantart.com/art/kh-enchanted-how-do-you-know-84506838)
*wets herself laughing* That was awesome, just the thing for a blah rainy day.
I think this is my favorite part.
this should’ve been the point when Roxas threw their collective self into the lake. Something seemed to be keeping him. It might’ve been the choreography, as both pretty princesses began spinning their way off along the path.
Because yeah, Sora really is a pretty, pretty princess. Much to Roxas' utter dismay, I'm sure.

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Date: 2008-05-02 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
It's even funnier when you've just finished watching the Polish version of the same song!!! ^^

Fantastic, all the same.

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Date: 2008-05-03 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psychoe.livejournal.com
ADORABLE! And a great companion to chira's awesome pic!

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Date: 2008-05-03 01:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syvia.livejournal.com
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN' AWESOME!

I APOLOGIZE FOR THIS-

*HUGS THE LIFE OUT OF YOU*

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Date: 2008-05-03 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odd-stick.livejournal.com
That was simply amazing and I want to see more! Perfect scene and personifications!

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Date: 2008-05-03 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haruko318.livejournal.com
hahaha That was a good one. I feel like such a dork, having never seen Enchanted. I followed this link from dA. Definitely adding this to my memories.

who is also here from chirachira's devart page

Date: 2008-05-04 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wolfieziri.livejournal.com
This just made my night, thank you. ♥

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Date: 2008-05-04 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sanzo-holic.livejournal.com
Another person who was linked from Chirachira's page. Best crossover EVAH. This made my day! XD

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Date: 2008-05-08 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riled-wings.livejournal.com
hahhaaaa XD wth?
I bursted out laughing!

HAR!

Date: 2008-05-11 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
OMFG. I totally want to read more of this! lolol

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Date: 2008-05-27 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azure-sashes.livejournal.com
Oh gosh, that was too cute! I can totally see Robert and Riku getting along too. XD

((From [livejournal.com profile] insanepurin, using her writing journal because of her recently updated Enchanted icon))

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Date: 2008-05-27 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obabscribbler.livejournal.com
Hi there. Jut thought I'd let you know I was so impressed with this that I recced it in my journal - http://obabscribbler.livejournal.com/353974.html

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Date: 2008-05-28 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] llivla.livejournal.com
Came here from khrecs and OMFG, you are amazing and I was grinning and smiling and laughing through the whole damn thing--it was perfect. &hearts &hearts &hearts

I Love It

Date: 2008-06-10 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laxun14.livejournal.com
I loved your story! I found it when I looked for kingdom hearts enchanted, and I found the picture that your friend drew. I loved the picture so much I made it my icon. Great story, I love this movie.

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Date: 2008-06-12 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kokkoryuha.livejournal.com
Awesome times a thousand. XD

Win!

Date: 2008-06-14 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryuaka.livejournal.com
X100000000000!!!!
I just love this story, and must rec far and wide.
Poor Riku!

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Date: 2008-07-06 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] okroginator.livejournal.com
WIN. WIN. WIIIIINNNNN~~

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Date: 2008-07-06 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kissofcamine.livejournal.com
OH DEAR GOD THAT WAS HILARIOUS. I don't know if I'd be sympathizing with Riku or embracing my guilty pleasure of singing Disney songs with Sora, though XD

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Date: 2008-08-13 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinzuku.livejournal.com
The poised candy apple?

Giselle continued: “How does she know that you really--”

“--truly?” supplied Sora, the grin was beginning to grow.

“Love her!” finished Giselle, matter-of-factly.


This is awesome.

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Date: 2008-08-23 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akaiouja-fic.livejournal.com
Wow. Were you at Otakon? Cause one of the masquerade pieces was just like this. Great job!

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Date: 2008-08-24 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
Hahah. Yes I was. The Sora in that skit was a very good friend of mine it was inspired off of this and a sketch that was done by [livejournal.com profile] halcyonjazz. :)

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Date: 2008-09-03 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xiamei.livejournal.com
"It might’ve been the choreography, as both pretty princesses began spinning their way off along the path."

===> LOL XD

I totally love this. Especially the ice cream comment. XD (And the PRINCESSES line)

Indeed, we live in a psychotic world. XD

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Date: 2008-09-15 02:41 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh my gosh. (dies laughing)
It's been days since I read this, and I STILL get giddy just thinking about it.
And now I can't wipe this stupid grin off my face. Wonderful.

I-I love you. Really. <3

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Date: 2008-11-11 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andiaradan.livejournal.com
Me too. xD

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Date: 2008-12-23 04:23 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] renaissanced.livejournal.com
...how did I just now find this? ;_; it's so beautiful ♥

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Date: 2008-12-27 07:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverfox237.livejournal.com
*strangles herself w/ her efforts not to explode laughing and wake entire household*
XDXDXDXD
That was THE BEST EVER! You rock so much!

And if you're wondering who I am, I stumbled onto this by accident while browsing the Favorites gallery of a friend's friend on DeviantArt. The link I followed was in association w/ a pic Chira-chira drew for you. I'm sure you know which one. ^^
There. My conscious is clear now that I've made sure you aren't thoroughly confused by my sudden appearance. ^^ This was so incredibly funny. Most hilarious thing I have seen all week. Please write more!

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Date: 2009-07-24 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justmissjac.livejournal.com
That is... made of so much win. <3

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Date: 2009-08-13 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shortsweetsoul.livejournal.com
I don't know how I got here!

BUUT THIS IS THE BEST THING I'VE READ IN A LONG LONG TIME.

Tears! In my eyes! This is on the extreme end of hilarious.

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Date: 2009-09-11 01:58 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-09-20 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ariaeve.livejournal.com
This is the funniest thing I've read in a while.

<3 Eternal love.

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Date: 2009-11-22 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 0armoredsoul0.livejournal.com
I'm laughing so hard I can barely breathe.
The image is simply ludicrous!
HAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!
XD

Yo

Date: 2009-12-26 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
this was super funny! i had to laugh!

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Date: 2010-01-20 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katsuno-hitomi.livejournal.com
Yet another link from chira-chira's Dev art gallery. This is pure genious. 'Nough said.

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Date: 2010-02-04 07:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jluna.livejournal.com
Hahaha! I've always wanted to read a KH/Enchanted crossover! I loved the ending with the candied apple, very subtle! I'm soooo putting this under memories.

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Date: 2010-09-16 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisa-telramor.livejournal.com
This is awesome. And this would so totally happen it almost isn't funny. Except it is. Terribly. =^-^=

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Date: 2010-09-20 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iclexica.livejournal.com
HELLO RANDOM STRANGER I LOVE YOU. YOU ARE SO AWESOME FOR WRITING THIS.

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