Oh, my gosh, what on earth are you talking about, this is perfect. Every single detail is a delight (the shift to Ergo Proxy in iii! !!!) and the last section made my toes curl (hahaha, the table! The bruises on his arms! *flails*), but what I love most is how each section follows the show and Re-l's evolving perspective/relationships - her contempt for Vincent changing into something else entirely. (My very, very favorite example of this evolving perspective is the use of autoreiv in i vs. the use of Pino in iv. Just -- gosh. So perfect.)

SURPRISE: Your characterization is gorgeous. (Re-l! Vincent! Pino! And oh, I love that it's told from Re-l's perspective and how this colors each section of the story.)

So...yes. *ADORES*

(And they totally need to make out all the time. All the little details of the last section...! The bruises, the table, Pino's education, Vincent's grin, Re-l's unshakeable cool -- yes. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.)