I loved the dialogue in this story It is absolutely perfect. Malcolm has such an interesting viewpoint of the world But Grandmother is the crown princess, so she may do as she likes as well, and she is larger than me, so I must be polite. I snickered.
I also loved the lines: “What’s the difference between a parlor and a drawing room?" The new servant eyed him narrowly. “One of them has the Prince in it. Come." Priceless.
I really hope you write more on this. I would love to see it develop.
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Date: 2008-03-08 12:48 pm (UTC)I also loved the lines: “What’s the difference between a parlor and a drawing room?" The new servant eyed him narrowly. “One of them has the Prince in it. Come." Priceless.
I really hope you write more on this. I would love to see it develop.