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I like Rikichi. I like Rikichi a lot. I liked him when he had no name and so for its lack I called him "Renji's nameless bitch boy." ...also Byakuya is terribly off in this, I think. But I blame that on writing this in an effort not to pay attention to my history class. (also he might be high on painkillers anyway. Not that he'll admit to it, the priss.)

The concept I just blame on my icon.



Rikichi swallowed. “Captain?”

From his desk, Byakuya lifted his eyes.

This, Rikichi realized, was the feeling of the insect as the sandal came down.

“I-I-I can I—”

“You may finish that statement.”

“Can I speak with you, sir.”

“Hm,” said Byakuya, turning a white bandaged wrist: which was a perfectly valid answer, of course. The man was a Captain, after all, a clan head and so of course, of course it was an answer that made absolute sense! …it just didn’t help Rikichi very much. Accepting such unworthiness, the boy bowed. The beads in his hair rattled.

“Sir,” he began, hoarsely, “I--”

“I am aware of your involvement,” said the Captain, sounding, if anything, very bored.

“…oh.” And in so few words, Rikichi forgot what he’d planned to say entirely. His head supplied a meek: can I go now? Which he almost asked…before remembering he’d been the one to call himself to the man’s office to begin with. So. Bracing himself, he said instead: “I’m sorry, sir. But I don’t regret it, sir. I feel what I did was very necessary, uh, sir.”

Winter winds would be warm and welcome in comparison to all the response that garnered, from Byakuya. “Oh?”

Rikichi babbled: “Yes, sir. Captain. Sir. I. I. Vice-Captain Abarai was a really coo—an exemplary officer, with a strong sense of duty. And loyalty. And I know that. And--” I’m going to die. I may as well “--and I think the Captain knows it too.”

He thought of all the poems he’d been forced to learn growing up about cricket song. It seemed like a good thing to think about, to try and pretend the heavy silence that followed wasn’t just that.

“Does he?” murmured Byakuya, eventually.

Brief, bright, light. It’ll at least be pretty. If kinda pathetic…. “Yes,” answered Rikichi, meeting the man’s eyes. “The Captain wouldn’t have chosen him as a Vice…if….if he wasn’t anything less than the standard of this division.”

“Perfection,” reminded the Captain of the 6th.

“Y-yessir. Yes.” The boy smiled sheepishly as he stuck his chin up. “I know that too.”

“One wondered.” Byakuya sat back. Here, Rikichi allowed himself the luxury of observation: realizing with some shock how labored the movement was. The Captain had been injured, he’d known, but he hadn’t quite believed…

“Rikichi,” there was nothing injured in that voice, though. “That is--“

“I’m sorry sir!” the young officer burst out. “But I don’t think what I did was wrong! I really don’t!”

“That is a most contradictory statement.”

“…oh. Um.” The edge of hysteria faded into a nervous chuckle. Rikichi slouched, and shuffled, and suddenly felt terribly stupid. “I guess. I’m. Not that sorry. Actually.”

“Hm,” said Byakuya. “And I suppose now you plan to make a demand.”

“What?”

The Captain, keen on wasting no more dramatic pause, arched his brow at him significantly.

“She would make demands,” he said, in a tone no different, but with eyes that Rikichi had never seen before, in his whole life, “After making her apologies.”

“Oh,” said the boy, for a third time that visit. Which probably meant some sort curse laid upon him, but at that point his mouth had gone dry and his throat had gone tight. “Ah..aha. In that case.” He bowed for a second time, much more graceful than the first.

Rikichi had almost considered combing his hair over his tattoo. Almost, but had decided against it. Gravity was against him anyway--and he wasn’t ashamed of it, so what was the point?

“Most Honored Father,” he said. “Please let me come home.”

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:13 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bravecows.livejournal.com
Okay, I did not see that last line coming, and also another thing I did not see coming was the giant mutant alien SQUEE bursting out of my throat and OW. My lawyers will totally be keeping in touch! Damn it.

I liked that throat. It was a good throat, and it was my own.

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
One apologizes most humbly for ones damaged throat.

...one also has to wonder how the conversation went when he came home with that tattoo. (It just screams: I HAVE A CRUSH ON MY AUNTS SECRET BOYFRIEND...except I'm certain it's a strong, soldierly bond going on there. Way of the Samurai...wait.)

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siedhr.livejournal.com
I really love your writing (though I never commented) and I love this one. It's just that I don't get who "she" is. O_o

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siedhr.livejournal.com
Ah, I got it. :) Also, I've read the other comments as well, so that's a bit of cheating.:) Humm, interesting. The resemblance is there.

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-down.livejournal.com
I wondered and I clicked and - adlkfajedas! I remember this idea be it from you or Chira mentioning it. (prolly Chira - me memory be shot)

So fic + Rikichi!Byakuya son! = utter delight and lots of ♥♥♥'s!

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
Ahahah no no it's probably me. :D;; I tend to get these little brainworms that stay and stay and don't go away until canon wrests it from my cold, stiff fingers. (not that I don't enjoy the process)

Byakuspawn!Rikichi being one of them. (I will refrain from the 'pink' cracks, I will refrain, I will...)

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Date: 2005-11-08 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-down.livejournal.com
Damn, I suck - really it would be so much easier if I could refer to both of you as MoonandChira - the Ultimate Being - and thus be right %100 of the time when bringing up one of your ideas/theories.

And then Rukia Discovers she has a Nephew.

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Date: 2005-11-08 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
The conversation this fic DIDN'T end with, but boy was it tempting:

"Well! It looks like she's my aunt either way!"

"...get out."

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halcyonjazz.livejournal.com
.....So I DID know about it?

WOW MY MEMORY SUCKS HARDCORE.

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
Wait wait did you?

THIS MAKES THREE.

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Date: 2005-11-08 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halcyonjazz.livejournal.com
APPARANTLY!

I think it's just me and I made it contageous

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Date: 2005-11-08 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halcyonjazz.livejournal.com
.....I think I saw this before on Kids in the Hall

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Date: 2005-11-08 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-down.livejournal.com
I don't know. This may be cause for a whimper 'cause -

MINE SUCKS TOO. MORE SO.

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Date: 2005-11-08 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aidosaur.livejournal.com
THANK YOU

THANK YOU FOR THE RIKICHI LOVE ♥

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Date: 2005-11-08 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
CUTE LITTLE RENJI FANBOYS WHO TRY TO WOO BUTTERFLIES BACK BY CALLING THEMSELVES 'JENNIFER' NEED LOVE TOO.

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Date: 2005-11-08 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aidosaur.livejournal.com
Yes yes yes! I thoroughly agree!

And on that note, I am totally with you on the 'I loved Rikichi back before he had a name heart heart' boat. He's the cutest lil' pseudo-Renji fanboy ever.

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Date: 2005-11-08 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonsheen.livejournal.com
I think if the butterflies didn't do it he would've won me over just for the fact he used Zabimaru to cut vegetables. I'd been hoping he'd get a name ever since. And then he did. And was adorable and came with Hanatarou. I liked to think those two were dopey together while Rukia was imprisoned.

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Date: 2005-11-08 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophiap.livejournal.com
Dayum... That last line was a perfect punch to the gut.

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Date: 2005-11-08 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fairywine.livejournal.com
Rikichi does need more love. Kuchiki Rikichi does sound a little weird, though.

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Date: 2005-11-08 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] himawari.livejournal.com
Oh. Oh... I love that last line. ♥ It works perfectly and I like spacey, nostalgic Byakuya. :)

Rikichi is utterly adorable with the Renji worship and butterfly wrangling and vegetable chopping. He and Hanatarou should team up to take over Soul Society with cuteness.

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Date: 2005-11-09 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thetruebard.livejournal.com
Remind me to shower [livejournal.com profile] quiet_melee with rose petals for introducing me to your journal.

:D

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Date: 2005-11-09 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lihsa.livejournal.com
Rikichi is. So. Much. Love. People don't write him enough... though you wrote him just right, and I love you for it.

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Date: 2005-11-09 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiea.livejournal.com
OMFG. I love this so much. No one ever writes Rikichi and he's so adorable! XD

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Date: 2005-11-11 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naifun.livejournal.com
...the quiet little crumple coming from the corner was me stuffing my fist in my mouth to keep from squeeing loudly enough to destroy my vocal cords, and we can't have that.

That last line-- th-- faaaaaaaugh. These things, you know. They-- oh, screw speech.

-gibbers-

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Date: 2005-12-02 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily22.livejournal.com
AAAAAAAAH

(The original AAAH was longer, but I decided to cut it off, because getting an email with too many pointy capital A's is scary, yo.)

(That was a good AAAH by the way, and no less good for its abridgement.)

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